September 06, 2005

My Date with Nate

We ate bait
on my date with Nate
Sitting on crates
in the night very late.

To conjugate,
I just couldn’t wait
for love to sate
like fine opiate.

But it wasn't my fate
to find such a mate,
cuz sadly for me
Nate couldn’t inflate.

© badpoet

3 Comments:

Blogger Unknown said...

This is a very fun poem and it shows that you are having fun. Good job, this is what poetry is all about
David

September 22, 2005 5:56 PM  
Blogger Queen Tut said...

Ha ha, that is v funny! I wasnt sure how it was going to end. Its great to read your work!~

October 31, 2005 2:29 PM  
Blogger Ian T. said...

I think the fourth stanza might end in a four syllable "ate" word - nah, I didn't really say that! ;)

November 02, 2005 7:56 PM  

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